4 Replies to “She Lingers”

  1. May they find one another.

    THE MILKWHITE MAGIC

    The rolling mist obscured the shards of glass
    Barefoot they tiptoed toward each other
    Drawn on by cries of pain

    In the right hand
    Each held one half
    Of a passport to the sun

    1. Poignant yet beautiful poem with very vivid images which bring your poem alive.
      Thank you very kindly for your poetic response, Ben. Tis good to read you again!

  2. So beautiful, both waiting for each other, her heart in turmoil, he calm and patient, but when will they meet?

    Veel liefs; Steph

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